What you need to do—because this is the first. [causal]
What you need to do—because this is the first thing an agent or editor will do—is look at comparative titles.
Tilar J Mazzeo, How to Write a Bestseller, loc. 144What you need to do—because this is the first thing an agent or editor will do—is look at comparative titles.
Tilar J Mazzeo, How to Write a Bestseller, loc. 144